If you want to make corrections to your 12-sentence paragraph, look at the PowerPoint below. You have until October 26 to do this, but the sooner you make the corrections, the sooner your grade will change.
Here are the resources we used for revising the personal narrative. Remember, you will be in the computer lab September 26 to make the corrections you need to make. Your narrative needs to be in by September 28.
This is the PowerPoint that goes through the 12-sentence paragraph sentence by sentence. Use it for the analytical paragraph about summer homework.
We started The Painted Drum this week. The introductory PowerPoint with the notes on the author and on the literary elements and the reading guide are both posted here.